Review about Conference

I had conference on last Tuesday. I wanted to know lack of my essay. Teacher pointed out my mistakes. I always forget using “a, an”. I also write my opinion more specific. To write more specific can make my essay enrich. Moreover, I need to accurate writing. I have to write essay like English style as far as possible. Conference was useful. When I write an essay, I had not thought missing “a, an”. I’m going to beware of missing “a, an”. I think I don’t reach my goals and I need more efforts. I should not stop working hard. Furthermore, I make new next week goals. I’m going to make full use of the conference so I’m going to ask teacher more questions so get knowledge. Another goal is to write an essay as soon as possible because I always spend a lot of time on writing so my essay’s conclusion is always not good.  I really want to write a good conclusion because conclusion is important part of essay. Even though introduction and body paragraphs are good, an essay contain bad conclusion never become a good essay. In addition, I have to try to using various vocabularies. Various vocabularies make essay can have fluency.